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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 18, 2017 23:29:00 GMT -5
1st is Aum
2nd is Uha
3rd is Mama
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 19, 2017 7:03:03 GMT -5
I ran away from home
But where's home?
When it's here inside me.
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Post by justlikeyou on Oct 19, 2017 15:55:20 GMT -5
FWIW, the poem I posted yesterday is not considered haiku exactly. Most editors would likely call it senryu. Roughly speaking, the difference being that haiku is based upon observation of nature, and senryu is based upon the observation of human nature. Sometimes there is a mix of both nature and human nature, but it would still place it firmly in the senryu category in many eyes. In any case, the best source of good haiku and/or senryu seems to be born of paying attention to what is.
lemon blossoms
her pout
becomes a smile
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 19, 2017 16:30:18 GMT -5
I have a feeling
It's you, I know
With many names
The heart's the same
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Post by laughter on Oct 19, 2017 21:14:18 GMT -5
FWIW, the poem I posted yesterday is not considered haiku exactly. Most editors would likely call it senryu. Roughly speaking, the difference being that haiku is based upon observation of nature, and senryu is based upon the observation of human nature. Sometimes there is a mix of both nature and human nature, but it would still place it firmly in the senryu category in many eyes. In any case, the best source of good haiku and/or senryu seems to be born of paying attention to what is. lemon blossoms her pout becomes a smile there's precision in rescission of the pit of peepness ..  |
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 20, 2017 3:12:26 GMT -5
Echo is the past
Present is the voice
Sound is the future
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 20, 2017 19:35:44 GMT -5
Loved when new
Thrown when old
Guess, what am I?
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Post by justlikeyou on Oct 20, 2017 19:38:10 GMT -5
FWIW, the poem I posted yesterday is not considered haiku exactly. Most editors would likely call it senryu. Roughly speaking, the difference being that haiku is based upon observation of nature, and senryu is based upon the observation of human nature. Sometimes there is a mix of both nature and human nature, but it would still place it firmly in the senryu category in many eyes. In any case, the best source of good haiku and/or senryu seems to be born of paying attention to what is. lemon blossoms her pout becomes a smile there's precision in rescission of the pit of peepness .. Yes. Precision here is in the absence of interpretation. One of the big no-no's of haiku is telling instead of showing. Unfortunately, telling is what the peep is all about.  |
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Post by laughter on Oct 20, 2017 22:41:53 GMT -5
there's precision in rescission of the pit of peepness .. Yes. Precision here is in the absence of interpretation. One of the big no-no's of haiku is telling instead of showing. Unfortunately, telling is what the peep is all about. tell me about it yes, I really want to hear listening is art |
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 21, 2017 3:56:59 GMT -5
Tears like rain
Fall down my face
Washed with pain
The scars remain
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 21, 2017 8:15:34 GMT -5
Deep in my heart
Are worlds apart
The self & me
Simultaneously different
Yet one with Thee
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 21, 2017 16:41:24 GMT -5
In the middle of nowhere
A fox and rabbit came
One hungry the other thirsty
By divine providence
Soon a friendship bloomed
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 21, 2017 19:15:32 GMT -5
In every turn
For every corner
One can go either
left or right but
forward.
Else one slams into
something.
It happened to two planes
on 09.11.2001.
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 21, 2017 19:26:54 GMT -5
There's no escape
from illusion
There's a way out
from the unreal
By opening the third eye
Which is the " I am "
One exits.
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Post by krsnaraja on Oct 22, 2017 16:56:50 GMT -5
Dinner is served
A pot of gold
The stomach is richer
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