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Post by silver on Sept 19, 2014 22:58:14 GMT -5
Life as juicy as Peaches that fall from the tree Down into my lap maybe better without the double down? but I liked. I don't see two 'downs' -- maybe you read it wrong? but bravo for being brave enough to critique.
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Post by laughter on Sept 19, 2014 23:29:17 GMT -5
comentary? hmmmm should we start another thread for the babbling?
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Post by laughter on Sept 19, 2014 23:39:03 GMT -5
smileys, frowns, funny face does emoticon count as extra syllable??
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Post by laughter on Sept 19, 2014 23:41:25 GMT -5
its a massacreee! it ain't right! I tells ya, no! japan graves spin there
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Post by Reefs on Sept 22, 2014 12:36:06 GMT -5
experiencer with black/white still mind goggles hear yourself dreaming!
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Post by laughter on Sept 22, 2014 13:17:34 GMT -5
this dumpster smells bad hey! found some comet down here! it will scrub what is
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Post by laughter on Sept 22, 2014 20:39:28 GMT -5
juveniles run with the point facing out toward me WIBIGO bee stings
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Post by laughter on Sept 22, 2014 20:43:19 GMT -5
are you well tonight? off in the distance, thunder soldier feels at home
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Post by silver on Sept 22, 2014 22:37:14 GMT -5
Scoop out seeds and eat Honeydew and cantaloupe Summer almost gone
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Post by Reefs on Sept 23, 2014 0:12:02 GMT -5
Temple bells die out. The fragrant blossoms remain- A perfect evening!
- Basho
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Post by Deleted on Sept 23, 2014 1:00:42 GMT -5
5-7-5 Dogs barks nearby, yap yap Cats cringe hearing horrid screeching car tyres Birds do their best renditions.
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Post by quinn on Sept 23, 2014 6:47:22 GMT -5
In the morning mist Horse's breath suspends in air Then slowly joins in.
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Post by laughter on Sept 23, 2014 12:15:14 GMT -5
cuckoo no o'clock fact to face there is no thing here now in silence
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Post by laughter on Sept 23, 2014 12:17:18 GMT -5
realization clean and shiny absent two freedom? ha! ha! ha!
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Post by enigma on Sept 24, 2014 1:06:37 GMT -5
I like the cadence but the rules are not for me I won't play that game.
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