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Post by laughter on Sept 25, 2015 14:05:17 GMT -5
morality air high price, life conditioned seats the fairs are nowheres I had never heard of the 5-7-5 poem before the other day when you posted in it. What a joy is this vehicle to write about everyday happenings. I see poems everywhere now!! Mine above was about the local guy who flys his plane acrobatically from time to time, to my delight, and to the neighbors chagrin, (can be loud), in full view of my porch, as he did the other day, which inspired an immediate poem. My favorite part is when he climbs to a stall and the engines go silent for a few moments before roaring to life again in a dive. I'm like a kid and find it all quite thrilling. What about yours? What is it's meaning?
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Post by zin on Sept 25, 2015 14:15:20 GMT -5
I'll ~never~ play this! 'cause this already happened on a purple day
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Post by justlikeyou on Sept 25, 2015 14:31:43 GMT -5
I had never heard of the 5-7-5 poem before the other day when you posted in it. What a joy is this vehicle to write about everyday happenings. I see poems everywhere now!! Mine above was about the local guy who flys his plane acrobatically from time to time, to my delight, and to the neighbors chagrin, (can be loud), in full view of my porch, as he did the other day, which inspired an immediate poem. My favorite part is when he climbs to a stall and the engines go silent for a few moments before roaring to life again in a dive. I'm like a kid and find it all quite thrilling. What about yours? What is it's meaning? Note to self...Remember the Maine.
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Post by zin on Sept 25, 2015 14:42:35 GMT -5
Note to self...Remember the Maine. note to self... Maine always reminds me of Stephen King stories. ps. I don't remember too many, but I had liked the Dead Zone much.
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Post by silver on Sept 25, 2015 22:50:14 GMT -5
Note to self...Remember the Maine. note to self... Maine always reminds me of Stephen King stories. ps. I don't remember too many, but I had liked the Dead Zone much. Luv the King, have you watched the tv series?
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Post by zin on Sept 26, 2015 8:35:47 GMT -5
note to self... Maine always reminds me of Stephen King stories. ps. I don't remember too many, but I had liked the Dead Zone much. Luv the King, have you watched the tv series? No, I rarely watch tv (it started as obligatory -boarding school-, then became a maybe unfortunate habit). I guess the only thing both of us have watched is Dallas - I know it because it was a biiig event! I watched one or two movies though, from his stories; one was Shawshank Redemption, very good. Btw I read this in Imdb biography about him: "King gets depressed when people say The Stand is his best book because that was written three decades ago and implies he hasn't written anything as good since." LOL ..
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2015 9:45:39 GMT -5
with memorized words I could write one of these, but what's in it for me?
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Post by zin on Sept 26, 2015 9:49:38 GMT -5
with memorized words I could write one of these, but what's in it for me? Lol, I wish to immortalize that avatar: lol.. (kant stop)
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2015 10:48:16 GMT -5
with memorized words I could write one of these, but what's in it for me? Lol, I wish to immortalize that avatar: lol.. (kant stop) bummer , I figgered thirteen seventeen syllables about bhuddy bits woulda been a piece of cake... but my time caring about this little project has expired
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Post by silver on Sept 26, 2015 11:27:32 GMT -5
Lol, I wish to immortalize that avatar: lol.. (kant stop) bummer , I figgered thirteen syllables about bhuddy bits woulda been a piece of cake... but my time caring about this little project has expired Hey farmer...I'm interested: Why do you show up allah time, just to say you're uninterested in x y and/or z?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2015 11:35:46 GMT -5
bummer , I figgered thirteen syllables about bhuddy bits woulda been a piece of cake... but my time caring about this little project has expired Hey farmer...I'm interested: Why do you show up allah time, just to say you're uninterested in x y and/or z? I spent 45 minutes trying to write 13 17 syllables, so obviously there was interest in that little project but I don't have all day for this hun
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Post by silver on Sept 26, 2015 12:07:02 GMT -5
Hey farmer...I'm interested: Why do you show up allah time, just to say you're uninterested in x y and/or z? I spent 45 minutes trying to write 13 syllables, so obviously there was interest in that little project but I don't have all day for this hun Now that you put it that way, it IS funny. Do try to write the poetry that 'writes itself' -- lot easier.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2015 13:47:28 GMT -5
Do try to write the poetry that 'writes itself' -- lot easier. not to make a big deal about it, but that makes zero sense
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Post by silver on Sept 26, 2015 14:12:16 GMT -5
Do try to write the poetry that 'writes itself' -- lot easier. not to make a big deal about it, but that makes zero sense Yeah...I thought about that several moments after I wrote it - but I was too lazy to change it. Ask your cohort about poetry and how all of the relatively good stuff does seem to write itself.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2015 14:34:14 GMT -5
not to make a big deal about it, but that makes zero sense Yeah...I thought about that several moments after I wrote it - but I was too lazy to change it. Ask your cohort about poetry and how all of the relatively good stuff does seem to write itself. nope, not gonna do it I find myself mentally editing many of his poems, and if they'd 'written themselves', I wouldn't be doing that
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